Talk:The Kid (musical)/Archive 1
 | This is an archive of past discussions about The Kid (musical). Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the current talk page. |
| Archive 1 |
Notices posted to WikiProject talkpages
Notices posted to WikiProject talkpages, about new article creation of this page:
- Wikipedia talk:WikiProject LGBT studies
- Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Sexology and sexuality
- Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Musical Theatre
- Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Theatre
- Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Comedy
- Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Adoption, fostering, orphan care and displacement
-- Cirt (talk) 07:12, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
To do
The article needs a song list. See, e.g., Oklahoma! for format. When did the original production close? For how many performances did it run? Please add this to the productions section. It could use a section about themes or an "Analysis" section. see Hair (musical) for ideas along this line. All the best. -- Ssilvers (talk) 03:26, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
- Great ideas, all. Will try to address them. ;) -- Cirt (talk) 03:28, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
- Looks great. I am now more comfortable with the C-class assessment. The cast list includes Ruth, Susan and Chad, but they are not mentioned in the plot summary. Can you add a few words in the Role table to explain who they are? Conversely, I think that "mother" is a sufficient explanation of what this character is. If you want to take the article to B-class, it could still use a "themes" and/or "analysis" section, discussing the libretto and music, and it needs a "background" section with more detail on how the piece was conceived, written, developed and brought to the stage. See Hair (musical) and Carousel (musical) for ideas. Well done! -- Ssilvers (talk) 19:18, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks! Will try to address those remaining above suggestions. ;) -- Cirt (talk) 19:20, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- Looks great. I am now more comfortable with the C-class assessment. The cast list includes Ruth, Susan and Chad, but they are not mentioned in the plot summary. Can you add a few words in the Role table to explain who they are? Conversely, I think that "mother" is a sufficient explanation of what this character is. If you want to take the article to B-class, it could still use a "themes" and/or "analysis" section, discussing the libretto and music, and it needs a "background" section with more detail on how the piece was conceived, written, developed and brought to the stage. See Hair (musical) and Carousel (musical) for ideas. Well done! -- Ssilvers (talk) 19:18, 9 June 2011 (UTC)